The stream passes peacefully
Over the rocks,
Providing water for the weary
And life to the plants it passes,
Before finally joining
The river on its journey
To the sea.
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I don’t know your intention in writing the poem, but to me, it sounds as if it is describing our lives – if we endeavor to live peacefully. I like your poem very much.
You have the right idea for what it’s about, at least what I was aiming for. Of course different people will find something different, but I like your thoughts on it.
himym robin home country…
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